
BROKEN CORE: sister = doll, a girl story
A downloadable game for Windows, macOS, Linux, and Android
no one has to know. it can just be me and her, playing together, forever
dolls are awesome. you can do anything to them. you can insert yourself into them. linear visual novel of 25k words about why being a doll and a sister and a girl all means the same thing
this is a ren'py visual novel made for the doll&kigu jam
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https://nadianova.neocities.org/brokencore
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Development log
- updated14 days ago
- made an android build17 days ago
- game out now20 days ago





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The presentation of this VN is just amazing... the UI is so cool, that silhouette effect in the opening was awesome... this might be one of the most gut-wrenching VNs of yours that I've played??? Made me feel like I was having a panic attack (positive!)! Also I recognized some of Kyou's music here and it's great and you used it so well!! ^^
this hit me with hammers and sticks and i loved every second of it
Gods, that was gut-wrenching in the best of ways. Beautiful and horrifying, like an erotic panic attack dressed in frilly lace.
loved reading the inner workings of our protagonist, really liked the presentation (awesome lil opening too) and the complicated feelings that this brought to the surface.
can we get a shout out to totally normal girls?
girls are dolls and sisters are girls and dolls are sisters and silicone is warmer than skin
I have never read any sort of story that properly encapsulates some of the weird unspeakable feelings I've had towards my sisters as a trans woman until now.
Absolutely devastating read. 11/10
Amazing story about conflicted, tangled emotions. I love how the layers of the story blend together. Especially at the ending...
The music and visual art work well to enhance the writing. I especially loved how each girl had a different relationship to dolls, and how that informed their relationship to one another.
jesus christ. the visual effects are really impressive but more than that its very upsetting and i feel like i just got punched really hard in the chest which owns. crazy good game
Fucking killer game. Great art, raw writing. Having seen just the text version, I'm seriously impressed by how much you make the game pop off the screen with the puppet show. You do a great job adding in technical flourishes that really make things stand out. Fantastic and fun piece thank you both for sharing.
really really strong work, i loved the contrast between fantasy and reality with how it all came apart. very well scripted as well, i enjoyed how put together the presentation was.
What a ride, this was a hell of a read. It isn't to often that reading something makes me get up out of my chair with shock. I love how in Wilma's head we get especially as the fantasy of everything breaks down. I'm still not totally sure what to make of the ending but I also feel like the story couldn't have ended any other way. Amazing work
Whoa, this was a trip. Pleasantly unsettling and distressingly nerve-wracking. Impressive depiction of anxieties throughout. A+ ending. Lovely illustrations as well!!
not finished yet, really good so far, tho some lines i believe are the wrong color?? like if a diff character was speaking them, even tho its specified otherwise
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