BROKEN CORE: sister = doll, a girl story

Fucking killer game. Great art, raw writing. Having seen just the text version, I'm seriously impressed by how much you make the game pop off the screen with the puppet show. You do a great job adding in technical flourishes that really make things stand out. Fantastic and fun piece thank you both for sharing.

really really strong work, i loved the contrast between fantasy and reality with how it all came apart. very well scripted as well, i enjoyed how put together the presentation was.

What a ride, this was a hell of a read. It isn't to often that reading something makes me get up out of my chair with shock. I love how in Wilma's head we get especially as the fantasy of everything breaks down. I'm still not totally sure what to make of the ending but I also feel like the story couldn't have ended any other way.  Amazing work 

Whoa, this was a trip. Pleasantly unsettling and distressingly nerve-wracking. Impressive depiction of anxieties throughout. A+ ending. Lovely illustrations as well!!

not finished yet, really good so far, tho some lines i believe are the wrong color?? like if a diff character was speaking them, even tho its specified otherwise

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