Towards the end the story got so messy. Probably because it is about young adults that are quite dumb, easily influenced, and are lead by unhealthy love interests. This great plan that was executed so badly with so many mistakes. It feels so messily written yet so realistic. (Although I still can't quite believe why character #2 didn't go up to character #1 immediately when #2 saw #1 in the moring. She could've asked: "Hey #1, why would you let me bleed to death, did you know i would've survived? what would've you done if someone found my dead body and the evidence on my neck that would've encriminated you?").
Srsly #1 returned possibly without knowing if #2 was alive. If #2's body would've been found with evidence against #1, #1 would've been immediately locked up. What then? Is #1 and #1's secret ally is just stupid?
Anyway, moral of the story, if you want to have a war; have an actual good plan and give tasks to people that can do them. And if they can't then don't give them the same task again.
They chose a half measure when they should've gone all the way.
i did not expect this to be what it was, despite skimming over the comments and learning the story was going to be much deeper than the screenshots revealed, but god-
i never cry when reading things but something about this vn just ripped into me and into feelings i didn't even realise i had, also idk why but i love when fetish content is used to explore deeper story plots as it very much did in this, foreshadowing the ending and allowing for a better understanding of the characters and their motivations
I just finished this and woah. i'm glad i read it!!! it was so emotional and raw, the world you created for this was super intriguing as well, honestly it's rare i finish something and wish there was more! I hope this VN will get the recognition it deserves, it's genuinely THAT good. Thank you for making it <3
i cant even describe how much this game means to me. it's just incredible, you managed to somehow fit so many emotions and feelings and ideas that live inside into something amazing. i wish i knew how to say more. thank you
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this story will have you looking in the mirror afterwards like "oh. oh no"
Came to jerk it, left crying. 10/10 storytelling
10/10 what a journey reading through this, I was captivated from start to finish.
Upon finishing it said I unlocked an afterstory, but i've not been able to figure out how to do that. How do you access the afterstory?
it's on the title screen. click the epilogue.
good grief.. 9.82/10.00
5/5 AWESOME
explodes
I love it.
Towards the end the story got so messy. Probably because it is about young adults that are quite dumb, easily influenced, and are lead by unhealthy love interests. This great plan that was executed so badly with so many mistakes. It feels so messily written yet so realistic. (Although I still can't quite believe why character #2 didn't go up to character #1 immediately when #2 saw #1 in the moring. She could've asked: "Hey #1, why would you let me bleed to death, did you know i would've survived? what would've you done if someone found my dead body and the evidence on my neck that would've encriminated you?").
Srsly #1 returned possibly without knowing if #2 was alive. If #2's body would've been found with evidence against #1, #1 would've been immediately locked up. What then? Is #1 and #1's secret ally is just stupid?
Anyway, moral of the story, if you want to have a war; have an actual good plan and give tasks to people that can do them. And if they can't then don't give them the same task again.
They chose a half measure when they should've gone all the way.
to all the people who couldn't bust or jork it playing this game, skill issue.
5/5, 10/10, extremely good game
☹️ crying, shidding, pissing, sobbing. I tried to bust but still failed bro wth.
i did not expect this to be what it was, despite skimming over the comments and learning the story was going to be much deeper than the screenshots revealed, but god-
i never cry when reading things but something about this vn just ripped into me and into feelings i didn't even realise i had, also idk why but i love when fetish content is used to explore deeper story plots as it very much did in this, foreshadowing the ending and allowing for a better understanding of the characters and their motivations
10/10, the final chapter had me feeling like I was being slowly crushed by a hydraulic press
I just finished this and woah. i'm glad i read it!!! it was so emotional and raw, the world you created for this was super intriguing as well, honestly it's rare i finish something and wish there was more! I hope this VN will get the recognition it deserves, it's genuinely THAT good. Thank you for making it <3
i cant even describe how much this game means to me. it's just incredible, you managed to somehow fit so many emotions and feelings and ideas that live inside into something amazing. i wish i knew how to say more. thank you
11/10, hurt me but also loved me more than my mom did. Liliana is just like me fr, so much gender