Towards the end the story got so messy. Probably because it is about young adults that are quite dumb, easily influenced, and are lead by unhealthy love interests. This great plan that was executed so badly with so many mistakes. It feels so messily written yet so realistic. (Although I still can't quite believe why character #2 didn't go up to character #1 immediately when #2 saw #1 in the moring. She could've asked: "Hey #1, why would you let me bleed to death, did you know i would've survived? what would've you done if someone found my dead body and the evidence on my neck that would've encriminated you?").
Srsly #1 returned possibly without knowing if #2 was alive. If #2's body would've been found with evidence against #1, #1 would've been immediately locked up. What then? Is #1 and #1's secret ally is just stupid?
Anyway, moral of the story, if you want to have a war; have an actual good plan and give tasks to people that can do them. And if they can't then don't give them the same task again.
They chose a half measure when they should've gone all the way.
i did not expect this to be what it was, despite skimming over the comments and learning the story was going to be much deeper than the screenshots revealed, but god-
i never cry when reading things but something about this vn just ripped into me and into feelings i didn't even realise i had, also idk why but i love when fetish content is used to explore deeper story plots as it very much did in this, foreshadowing the ending and allowing for a better understanding of the characters and their motivations
I just finished this and woah. i'm glad i read it!!! it was so emotional and raw, the world you created for this was super intriguing as well, honestly it's rare i finish something and wish there was more! I hope this VN will get the recognition it deserves, it's genuinely THAT good. Thank you for making it <3
i cant even describe how much this game means to me. it's just incredible, you managed to somehow fit so many emotions and feelings and ideas that live inside into something amazing. i wish i knew how to say more. thank you
Came here to jork it, left wanting to sob into my pillow. I haven't felt such a strong combination of "fuck you for making this" and "thank you for this beautiful creation".
Really, really good. Left me with such a sinking feeling in my stomach after finishing. Great cast of characters and really compelling story. Also, Liliana is puppy doggy and I need to soak her in milk and throw her against a wall.
This game is simply amazing, on another level from the visual novels i played. It has a very specific target audience, that if you're in it, you'll feel like this games was made step by step thinking about you. To make you happy, and to make you hurt. When i finished it, it left me completely struck down, and even now, i feel like I'm drowning in thought of this game, and i think that if i replay, i will see aspects i didn't see before, i have a lot more things to say, but play for yourself! I guarantee you, that at some point, you will be so glad that you played this game.
this marks the first time i've ever left a comment on itch.io, but holy shit this game had me down apocalyptic and simultaneously aghast/conflicted - i was downright struck at my core.
i realized after i finished that i resonated a lot with lilana, both in a "yay she's just like me fr" and an "oh god" manner.
this game has left me irreparably changed, thank you for making it.
This was good, I resonate with the others (if me doing that wouldn't be obvious from the nick) that I really felt with Liliana. I need to curl up into a little ball after this, in a bittersweet way.
Devastating as per usual, you never fail to ruin me. Excellent writing, I became Liliana over the course of the story. I accepted into me the despair, the love, the pain and the joy through your words.
Spoilers below:
This resonates deeply with me to the point where it feels as through you pulled the abuse, control, manipulation and isolation directly from my own life. It was devastatingly tender in how it pressed into bruises I thought to be healed. The epilogue physically hurt me. 10/10 work
Absolutely loving it, all of your projects are so great and make me feel so so muuuuuuuch, i actually dedicate whole nights to it before my day off chilling and playing, i'm glad i found this page lol
tiny ot: does anyone know which donations are 'better' for the author, if itch io or patreon?
This was a genuine masterpiece. How can something be so beautiful yet so sad at the same time? Liliana deserves the entire universe, I can't help but feel bad for her but also feel content that she's happy how she is. The ending had me shocked, throughout the entire story, Francesca never had any interest in Liliana other than a daughter, and I think Liliana always had known that.
reading the through the artbook after finishing the game was a joy to see your process and thoughts, and the second to last page explaining francesca's abilities in objective truth was truly gut wrenching
this is heart-wrenching, beautiful, strange, elegant, terrifying. i don't know how to process this... thank you, nadia, for your continued great writing.
for readers, expect a bit less outright sex than hopeless junction, for example. still very hot and weird and gay. but huge feels. huge ginormous feels.
holy fucking shiiiit! i was so fucking sad at the ending. but holyy shit. 100% recommend. the bgm fucking rock.
what transpired between lili and everyone else? relatable in ways that are unimaginable. but also heart wrecking. holy shit. i need to sit down and let it all soaked in. wow. this is such a sad piece of fiction, had me mourning over characters.. what can i say?
but with wordless things to say, i have to thank you so much for sparking ideas and inspirations and things i didnt think about. thank you so much, i enjoyed it and absolutely crashed by it. thank you really TToTT
Your works scratch the creative side of brain in a very stimulating way. It's been so long since I've been able to get back into this mindset and channel it into creative writing.
Thank you very much for all the incredible experiences, and for this one in particular. As always the writing is powerful, but the overall quality is even higher this time around.
I should play it again from the start and see where it'll take my mind this time.
Aaaaand of course you put a .gif of the spanking scene right near the top of the page. Honestly, that's probably the single most on-brand thing you possibly could've done, lol
All jokes aside, this VN turned out spectacularly~! This is easily your best work yet, Nadia—and I say that despite having been completely blown away by Hopeless Junction just a year prior! Watching Malmaid come together was an absolute delight, and I'm yet more pleased still to have had the opportunity to help you polish it up~
For everyone reading this comment who hasn't yet experienced Malmaid, stop dragging your feet about it and just read the damn thing already. It's well worth it, I promise~
Shana is a babe, but my heart goes out to Millarca and especially Imogen forever. Also, the track Aeon of Maiden has low-key been stuck in my head ever since I first heard it, heheheh~
Um... WOW. was not expecting this to be so good jesus christ. The ending wasn't happy per say but it very much contributes to the story overall and it's very well written in my opinion. Very sad ab Millarca tho she was so sweet 😔
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10/10 what a journey reading through this, I was captivated from start to finish.
Upon finishing it said I unlocked an afterstory, but i've not been able to figure out how to do that. How do you access the afterstory?
it's on the title screen. click the epilogue.
good grief.. 9.82/10.00
5/5 AWESOME
explodes
I love it.
Towards the end the story got so messy. Probably because it is about young adults that are quite dumb, easily influenced, and are lead by unhealthy love interests. This great plan that was executed so badly with so many mistakes. It feels so messily written yet so realistic. (Although I still can't quite believe why character #2 didn't go up to character #1 immediately when #2 saw #1 in the moring. She could've asked: "Hey #1, why would you let me bleed to death, did you know i would've survived? what would've you done if someone found my dead body and the evidence on my neck that would've encriminated you?").
Srsly #1 returned possibly without knowing if #2 was alive. If #2's body would've been found with evidence against #1, #1 would've been immediately locked up. What then? Is #1 and #1's secret ally is just stupid?
Anyway, moral of the story, if you want to have a war; have an actual good plan and give tasks to people that can do them. And if they can't then don't give them the same task again.
They chose a half measure when they should've gone all the way.
to all the people who couldn't bust or jork it playing this game, skill issue.
5/5, 10/10, extremely good game
☹️ crying, shidding, pissing, sobbing. I tried to bust but still failed bro wth.
i did not expect this to be what it was, despite skimming over the comments and learning the story was going to be much deeper than the screenshots revealed, but god-
i never cry when reading things but something about this vn just ripped into me and into feelings i didn't even realise i had, also idk why but i love when fetish content is used to explore deeper story plots as it very much did in this, foreshadowing the ending and allowing for a better understanding of the characters and their motivations
10/10, the final chapter had me feeling like I was being slowly crushed by a hydraulic press
I just finished this and woah. i'm glad i read it!!! it was so emotional and raw, the world you created for this was super intriguing as well, honestly it's rare i finish something and wish there was more! I hope this VN will get the recognition it deserves, it's genuinely THAT good. Thank you for making it <3
i cant even describe how much this game means to me. it's just incredible, you managed to somehow fit so many emotions and feelings and ideas that live inside into something amazing. i wish i knew how to say more. thank you
11/10, hurt me but also loved me more than my mom did. Liliana is just like me fr, so much gender
Came here to jork it, left wanting to sob into my pillow. I haven't felt such a strong combination of "fuck you for making this" and "thank you for this beautiful creation".
5/5.
ohh, silly little goofball. never come to a nadianova game tryna jork it. you'll just end up crying.
feel like someone beat me with a sledgehammer after playing. 10/5 stars
Really, really good. Left me with such a sinking feeling in my stomach after finishing. Great cast of characters and really compelling story. Also, Liliana is puppy doggy and I need to soak her in milk and throw her against a wall.
This game is simply amazing, on another level from the visual novels i played. It has a very specific target audience, that if you're in it, you'll feel like this games was made step by step thinking about you. To make you happy, and to make you hurt. When i finished it, it left me completely struck down, and even now, i feel like I'm drowning in thought of this game, and i think that if i replay, i will see aspects i didn't see before, i have a lot more things to say, but play for yourself! I guarantee you, that at some point, you will be so glad that you played this game.
Liliana is me fr!
wow i am NOT ok after that
Hi witnes
hi lily :D
Are there any spanking scenes other than that first one?
this marks the first time i've ever left a comment on itch.io, but holy shit this game had me down apocalyptic and simultaneously aghast/conflicted - i was downright struck at my core.
i realized after i finished that i resonated a lot with lilana, both in a "yay she's just like me fr" and an "oh god" manner.
this game has left me irreparably changed, thank you for making it.
This was so good,,,,
Registered an account just to say... fuck.
This was good, I resonate with the others (if me doing that wouldn't be obvious from the nick) that I really felt with Liliana. I need to curl up into a little ball after this, in a bittersweet way.
Absolute clusterfuck of emoti0ns. The story is good, art is delicious, the characters are PEAK. 12/10, will play more of your games :3
This was so beautiful and also hurt so much.
The art, the music, the sound effects, the writing. Everything felt like a genuine masterclass.
I truly felt for Liliana, and everyone else. Everyone is suffering.
If there is a sequel, I wish that one day it could have a happy ending, but I don't think I should have my hopes up.
oh god this hit way too close to home i have to go hit a dab and crawl into a ball and molt like a bug 10/10
Devastating as per usual, you never fail to ruin me. Excellent writing, I became Liliana over the course of the story. I accepted into me the despair, the love, the pain and the joy through your words.
Spoilers below:
This resonates deeply with me to the point where it feels as through you pulled the abuse, control, manipulation and isolation directly from my own life. It was devastatingly tender in how it pressed into bruises I thought to be healed. The epilogue physically hurt me. 10/10 work
Absolutely loving it, all of your projects are so great and make me feel so so muuuuuuuch, i actually dedicate whole nights to it before my day off chilling and playing, i'm glad i found this page lol
tiny ot: does anyone know which donations are 'better' for the author, if itch io or patreon?
Games like these are why I love visual novels, the emotions in this story were incredibly raw. Phenomenal
fucking broke me
10/10
MILF GOT BOD (Mom In Late Fifties + Girl On The Brink Of Death)
weeUGHH ACK COUGH eweuhbEWUAHHH aaaAWAAaaHh huhGHHH huhgH SNIFFFF AAAGH. hhheuuh... hhhheuyh whimper ...hh-hhhhhghh... sniffle sniff weehhh.... hhhoo... hh...
This was a genuine masterpiece. How can something be so beautiful yet so sad at the same time? Liliana deserves the entire universe, I can't help but feel bad for her but also feel content that she's happy how she is. The ending had me shocked, throughout the entire story, Francesca never had any interest in Liliana other than a daughter, and I think Liliana always had known that.
reading the through the artbook after finishing the game was a joy to see your process and thoughts, and the second to last page explaining francesca's abilities in objective truth was truly gut wrenching
10/10 banger it helped me to finally get my friend on hrt weirdly enough,,, i guess doomed toxic yuri is pretty powerful,,,,
True friends manipulate to transition <33
true !!!
holy fuck.
this is heart-wrenching, beautiful, strange, elegant, terrifying. i don't know how to process this... thank you, nadia, for your continued great writing.
for readers, expect a bit less outright sex than hopeless junction, for example. still very hot and weird and gay. but huge feels. huge ginormous feels.
holy fucking shiiiit! i was so fucking sad at the ending. but holyy shit. 100% recommend. the bgm fucking rock.
what transpired between lili and everyone else? relatable in ways that are unimaginable. but also heart wrecking. holy shit. i need to sit down and let it all soaked in. wow. this is such a sad piece of fiction, had me mourning over characters.. what can i say?
but with wordless things to say, i have to thank you so much for sparking ideas and inspirations and things i didnt think about. thank you so much, i enjoyed it and absolutely crashed by it. thank you really TToTT
Your works scratch the creative side of brain in a very stimulating way. It's been so long since I've been able to get back into this mindset and channel it into creative writing.
Thank you very much for all the incredible experiences, and for this one in particular. As always the writing is powerful, but the overall quality is even higher this time around.
I should play it again from the start and see where it'll take my mind this time.
Aaaaand of course you put a .gif of the spanking scene right near the top of the page. Honestly, that's probably the single most on-brand thing you possibly could've done, lol
All jokes aside, this VN turned out spectacularly~! This is easily your best work yet, Nadia—and I say that despite having been completely blown away by Hopeless Junction just a year prior! Watching Malmaid come together was an absolute delight, and I'm yet more pleased still to have had the opportunity to help you polish it up~
For everyone reading this comment who hasn't yet experienced Malmaid, stop dragging your feet about it and just read the damn thing already. It's well worth it, I promise~
Shana is a babe, but my heart goes out to Millarca and especially Imogen forever. Also, the track Aeon of Maiden has low-key been stuck in my head ever since I first heard it, heheheh~
Um... WOW. was not expecting this to be so good jesus christ. The ending wasn't happy per say but it very much contributes to the story overall and it's very well written in my opinion. Very sad ab Millarca tho she was so sweet 😔